Los Angeles Golf Courses & Discount Tee Times

GOLFER enters office. Squirms while checking email. Suddenly, he's interested. OVER SHOULDER: computer webpage as golfer selects tee time at a discount price. He strides out of office, avoiding coworkers on the way to nearest exit. SMASH CUT EXT: Golfer hitting drive off the tee. Palm trees wave under a California sky as ball disappears. BEVERAGE CART GIRL smiles at him. SFX: tinker bell.

Everybody's writing a script, right? Why sweat Universal Studios Hollywood? Put Hermosa Beach or Marina Del Rey or Redondo in your story and shoot on location. Play the course as it lies from the golfer's point of view. And write somebody special into the scene. CLOSE UP: beverage cart girl talking. NONSYNCH SOUND: ocean waves crashing, seagulls, soft laughter. JUMP CUT: couple at beach, sundown.